Have you ever had that colleague or friend or family member who interr...
No?
(You answered that quickly...maybe you are that pers...)
What?
Yes, I have a POINT.
Today's video is about listening and finding out that some people will stick by you even when you're being a pri...
Oh, and Beyoncé!
#Beyoncé
#texasholdem
#stickaround
#pricklypair
Today I have TWO elfchen poems based on our prickly pair...
prickles
poke others
to protect self
a layer of armor
lonely
(draft) ©2024, Bridget Magee. All Rights Reserved.
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persistence
deflects barbs
embraces sweetness underneath
loves through the armor
unconditionally
(draft) ©2024, Bridget Magee. All Rights Reserved.
Tanita at {fiction, instead of lies} is hosting Poetry Friday this week...check out the goodness!
Your posts are always such fun, Bridget! I especially like the line "loves through the armor"
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rose! Your comments are always so kind. :)
DeleteBridget, thanks for the prickly pair video and your Elfchen poems. I always wait for your humor to brighten my day. Your humor shows in your animated ,cartoon-like prickly pears and the shortened word choice you speak about. The pair remind me of my two little grands who pinch and poke each other and the baby. In face, one of them is staying for the weekend because her prickliness is popping everywhere.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Carol! Your grands (and children!) are so lucky to have you! Unconditional grandma love when one is feeling prickly is such a blessing. :)
DeleteOooh your "persistence" poem is so lovely Bridget! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sarah, for your comment. :)
DeleteHAHAHA, you had me at "pri..."
ReplyDeleteI love a good Elfchen, and you REALLY have this form down, able to make that double handful of syllables plus one make a sense that sticks with me. Here's to persistence, when we deal with the prickly, and here's to remembering that it's a lonely way to be.
Also, here's to a little dance montage with Beyoncé as needed. ☺
Thanks, Tanita! I'm always up for a Beyoncé dance montage! :)
DeleteGreat advice from the prickly pair indeed! Thanks Bridget!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Patricia! Cacti always have a point. :)
DeleteYes! to Beyoncé, & I wish I could share the "prickles" poem with a class, might help a few to make some changes! Yes, to philosophical elfchens, too!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Linda! Those classroom prickly pals seem to work against their own best interest, don't they?
DeleteGreat message in that first elfchen--for the prickler and the pricklee.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Molly! Prickles have to many points! :)
DeleteI love your two opposite versions of prickliness! AND your fun video!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mary Lee! Prickly pain is helpful for learning, unfortunately. (or fortunately?)
DeleteBridget, what a sweet post. I love the two poems and cartoon that go together so well. "When you're not being a prick," made me laugh. I love Beyoncé's new song!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Denise! Me, too, Beyoncé is the best. :)
DeleteLove the music! And, that first poem....oooof it hit me harder than I expected from a humorous poem post. Yes, lonely. Well done on that one. And, persistence to unconditionally is a wonderful path.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Linda! Yeah, being prickly is painful for all involved, but luckily there are those who can persist and love through the pokes. :)
DeleteBee a listener! Yes, I could do better. No better time to listen and be patient and be kind. I love how you use humor in your work!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Janice! Humor is my survival mechanism. I cannot imagine life without laughter, for me it's the POINT. :)
DeleteOh, your elfchens are just lovely, Bridget!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Laura! It's a fun (and challenging!) form. :)
DeleteI expected laughter all the way through but that first Elfchen caught me off guard. I've known some of those well-armored folks. Lonely indeed, but amazing what persistence and unconditional love can do. ❤️ Thanks, Bridget!
ReplyDeleteLove your Persistence elfchen
ReplyDelete"loves through the armor
unconditionally"
How powerful and worthy of achieving, thanks Bridget!